I’m here ...waiting
Impatiently, eyes full of tears,
The other day you said you loved me
You said it perfectly clear.
Now, today’s a new day
And you’re not here by my side,
Now everything you told me
Just feels like pain and lies.
You said you would be here forever
Was that just a lie, too?
You made promises you couldn’t keep
I had all my faith in you.
You took off with my heart
And life in your hands,
I’m left empty and incomplete
Why can’t you understand?
You let me down
When my hopes went high,
I try to smile
But I always sigh.
I’m left alone
With all the pain and misery,
Your love is all I ask for
Why can’t you see?
You loved me for who I was
Not for whom I tried to be,
You were the best thing that happened to me
You’ll always be with me.
We’ve been through too much
For you to push me away’
I’ll always love you no matter what
Trust me Love...It will never fade away.
14 comments:
Hey.. Why did ya delte my commnt.. For a person who writes touching poems like these.. its hard to believe that he is cold to emotions..jith.. plz .. I cant say more..
@ anonymous..
Certain things in life are pleasant when not said.. Its always better to understand and analyse our overpowering emotions before we express them..
true.. nyways its always nice to know someone like ya..
The poems are really gr8.....they touch everybody's heart who reads them. I am really fortunate to have known a person like you...all the best!!
@ anonymous..
Thank you...
@Sonali..
Thank you .. Pleasant to know a person like you too..
you shldnt thank friends.. STOP being formal with me ! plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Absolutely spellbound! very poignant & the style of expression is simply good! seldom did I notice emotions manifold interleave so well & leave a profound impression. Few things are better felt than described & your works exemplify that...
- Deepti.
@deepti...
Thank you..
Bello! espressione graziosa delle sensibilità
@Andrea..
Thanks a lot.. It would have been great and easier if you commented in english itself .. Thanks a lot..
This has left me speechless. This is true passion, emotion, and thought. I really don't know what to say. But yes, I do know what you feel. For people who've lost things in life, this poem makes a hell lot of sense. Oh yes, it does.
@ashesh...
Thanks a lot!
Hi Abhi,
truly poignant. It touches every heart that expereinced the pain of losing someone dear to us. things happen for a cause. We have to realise this and keep moving on. keep up this divine gift of creative writing.
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